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opinion essay

In America, of course the most liked and played sport is by far American football. Although many people argue it is the best sport in the world. And this is where I disagree, although in America the most played sport is football, Soccer is the most played sport in the world. This is why I think that soccer is by far the most loved and played sport in the world and will eventually grow into the US to be the most played sport. First off Id like to base my opinion off of history. The origins of soccer dates way back into 2500 BC starting off where Greece, China, and Egypt have all partaken the sport where you use your feet and involves a ball. The closest relation to the game back then was a game called Tsu-Chu, to where you use your feet to get a leather ball into a net posted up by two post. The only difference to the game was the height of the goal. This evolved into the most played sport in the world, Modern day soccer/futbol. And I think another reason that I think soccer wil...

Personal Essays

1. one of his first ideas or points was that you have to write about something that you strongly care about because you need to be able to gripe about it and truly put your opinion out there. 2. One idea that the writers said to do is to write concrete facts that go for your opinion so that this could perhaps persuade someone into thinking what you believe and the way you do that is through factual statements 3. 1- to use concrete factual statements 2- use personal perspective 3- avoid physiological rants that have nothing to do with the essay

Opinion preview assignment

1. Faad Ajaz 2. The immigration laws in America such as ICE 3. Fact: The ICE organization are going through Austin looking for Any sign of illegal immigrants. 4. My opinion on this is that they shouldn't be raiding Austin but at the same time I see where there coming from as ICE I somewhat agree with what there doing and although its sad it has to be done. Although at the same time I do think that Trump is going a bit over board with the wall and ICE. For example,  "Much of Trumps rhetoric was based on demonizing minority groups and casting them as criminals." 5. The opinion was strong on against this whole thing and didn't really change throughout the story. 6.  I think that some of the changes that can be made a 7.My new opinion is that there going overboard on this because there taking away peoples rights and some don't even have warrants 1. Reagan Wallace 2. new US secretary of education 3. They don't think that she is good for the job "unf...

SOM peer review

 ashton_b_blog Paragraphs 50 Quotes 25 Inverted Pyramid 20 Extra Credit 0 Total= 95

SLO review

1. D 2. A 3. C 4. D 5. B 6. C The prime minister and Tik Saki walk down the aisle for Saki to receive her Nobel prize. The reason Saki will receive her Nobel prize is because she did more than 1000 miracle operations that made the blind see again.

Student of the month story

To begin my story Eric Espinoza has recently won student of the month which in his words is "not really that big of a deal" Although the student of the month reward program is about rewarding the students that have been recently exceptional in there studies as a student tat Bowie high school and as a person alone. Eric Espinoza has just last month won this amazing honor of being the student of the month on the announcements last month on March 30, 2017. We asked Eric Espinoza how he did it and all he said was " To be honest its all about turning in homework and projects in on time".        For the second paragraph i would like to explain the importance of this story. The student of the month program truly is a reward system that can give students a incentive to win so that this will increase there overall grades, character, and the behavior of all the students at Bowie High School, In my opinion I think Eric Espinoza winning the Student of the month is very importa...

Nut Graf

A Nut Graf is written in paragraph form that explains the importance of the news and the story

Inverted Pyramid

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portfolio analysis

Part 1 Video 1 A.) Name of photographer Alyssa Shukar B.) General focus of portfolio peoples lives and sports C.) List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio 1. photos can be a little boring 2. Subject is not on point 3. Focus is off D.) List two things the judges like: 1. Picture of cheerleaders frame was cool 2. liked the swimming E.) what was the overall impression weird pictures. Video 2 A.) Travis Haughton B.) Sports and Jobs C.) 1. 2 pictures of the same image 2. Distracting backgrounds 3. bad transitions D.) 1. Funny photos 2. Tightness of the photos E.) Many pictures were interesting to me. Video 3 A.) Nick Adams B.) Sports and people C.) 1. Bad picture of the children 2. Same images 3. Wrong moment of action D.) 1. images were good enough 2. Funny images E.) Cool and some were interesting. Video 4 A.) Joustin Mott B.) Story of images C.) 1. Bad focus 2. no attention to portfolio building 3. Tried to get graphic ...